Again although you have written in a good amount of detail, you have mostly just described the things you see, rather than analysed them. In order to get a higher grade, try and add in some answers to these questions: * WHAT do their facial expressions suggest to an audience about what their characters will be like? * WHAT do their hoodies suggest about their to an audience? * WHY is it important that they mention the names of famous actors like Adam Deacon and famous bands like PLAN B? What effect will this have on the audience?
Also be careful as some of your text boxes have cut off some of your words and so we can't read them.
I am also concerned that there are still important posts missing from your blog such as: * Analysis of your own advert * Analysis of second professional advert * Analysis of second professional film poster * Film Marketing Research * Conventions of different film genres.
You must upload these asap and I will re-check your blog in mid january. Anything still not uploaded will have to be done in a catch up session after school.
Again although you have written in a good amount of detail, you have mostly just described the things you see, rather than analysed them. In order to get a higher grade, try and add in some answers to these questions:
ReplyDelete* WHAT do their facial expressions suggest to an audience about what their characters will be like?
* WHAT do their hoodies suggest about their to an audience?
* WHY is it important that they mention the names of famous actors like Adam Deacon and famous bands like PLAN B? What effect will this have on the audience?
Also be careful as some of your text boxes have cut off some of your words and so we can't read them.
ANALYSIS = 6/20 = D
I am also concerned that there are still important posts missing from your blog such as:
ReplyDelete* Analysis of your own advert
* Analysis of second professional advert
* Analysis of second professional film poster
* Film Marketing Research
* Conventions of different film genres.
You must upload these asap and I will re-check your blog in mid january. Anything still not uploaded will have to be done in a catch up session after school.