Well done for getting this uploaded via Scribd. Your work here is mostly description rather than analysis. For example, you have described the colours rather than analysing them. For higher marks you COULD say "the main colours are black and silver. Black is a masculine colour which suggests the playstation is mainly aimed at men. The silver colours are associated with technology which suggest the playstation is very high tech and futuristic." You need to try and do this with ALL your comments. Eg WHY have they chosen to show historical figures like Napoleon exploding out of the playstation? Please make these changes in your own time to improve your marks.
Well done for getting this uploaded via Scribd. Your work here is mostly description rather than analysis. For example, you have described the colours rather than analysing them. For higher marks you COULD say "the main colours are black and silver. Black is a masculine colour which suggests the playstation is mainly aimed at men. The silver colours are associated with technology which suggest the playstation is very high tech and futuristic." You need to try and do this with ALL your comments. Eg WHY have they chosen to show historical figures like Napoleon exploding out of the playstation? Please make these changes in your own time to improve your marks.
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There is also supposed to be a SECOND analysis of an advert. Where is this?
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